Change: "Fine, but you two need to go to sleep. I'll be right back with some advil." Kite kissed his brother on the forehead and gave   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 8172)

Change:  opened the door slowly so not to wake them.Kai was curled up in a ball close to his pillow and Sky had one arm drapped over Kai's waist. Sky slept on his stomach with his face smushed into the pillow muffling his loud snoring.   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 7149)

Change: fourone in the morning and Sky will probably be staying at my house," Kai said sitting on the worn up sofa. "So what are you guys doing here?""You know damn well why we're here," Gina said with a   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 7113)

Change: 'What's"What's the password??" Gina yelled at the stranger behind the door."Red! Now let me in!" Screamed a male voice.Gina stood up and unlocked the door. She pulled at the handle with both hands   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 6342)

Change: keys.keys."I'm guessing he could hear us," Gina giggled."Is their something I can help you with girls?" Mr. Kisaki said with his head stuck out the door."Yeah I left a picture here," Ren said. "Sorry to trouble you.""No problem," Mr. Kisaki   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 5896)

Change: There were only format changes (bold, italics, etc.) in this version. See this version for details. (Word count: 3305)

Change: Ren ignored her friend and continued drawing looking up at Mr. Kisaki once in awhile to see what he was doing. Her face grew bright   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 3273)

Change:  In the corner of the ceiling the room looked as if it would begin to leak soon. Some of the floor boards were halfway pulled   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 2466)

Change: I'm feelin' you! Wanna freak, wanna ride with you,let wanname kiss,feel wannadevotion putand myeveryday lipsI allalways overlove you!" Sky sang as the music Peaches and'Crazy CreamBaby' by 112Project Fantasy blasted in his ears.   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 1577)

Change: "Yeah." Sky said with a hint of nervousness in his voice. His eyes wandered to Kite who was getting out the bread. He then looked over at Kai who was sitting beside him. Sky leaned closer to Kai. "What did I do to make your bro mad?"Kai looked   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 1587)