Change: She started running towards the stairs while Naru and Hemutari followed. On their way up they ran into some guards and were being chased. “Hey!”   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 8524)

Change: He took Naru to a room and laid her down. Making sure that her wings were not damaged in any way. After leaving her he headed out to find the man that he thought could trying not to get caught.“Look who decided to drop   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 8289)

Change: She walked in to where Keida was and tried waking her up, but she wouldn’t budge. Keida finally woke when Naru pulled the covers off   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 8289)

Change: Her breath stopped suddenly and she fell without making a sound. It was almost as if she was as light as a feather. Her eyes   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 7677)

Change: Inside was Pouge, and he had a cat tail and ears. These ears looked like the one's he had tried on earlier, but only these   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 4049)

Change: A few hours after the incident Naru got a call on her cell phone. It was Kirt, and he was crying. "Listen Naru," he said,   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 2877)

Change: said, and then she headed down the hall towards the hospital kitchen. She was back in about ten minutes. When she got back with the water she stood, her face blank, and she dropped the glass of water.   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 2322)

Change: KiedaKeida to come home. It was five o'clock, and they were suposed to be going on blind dates with their friends Hemutari. The clock ticked by slowly. It was about five-thirty when KiedaKeida finally came through the door. "Ahhh!" shouted   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 2029)

Change: There were only format changes (bold, italics, etc.) in this version. See this version for details. (Word count: 1730)

Change: blonde, brown, and blue hair, and a diamond belly-button ring. They both jumped into Naru's red convertable. Naru didn't put the top up because she didn't want their hair to get messed up. Kieda turned up the stereo as loud as Naru   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 1730)