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Change: She started running towards the stairs while Naru and Hemutari followed. On their way up they ran into some guards and were being chased. “Hey!”
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Dec 12 2007, 4:25 PM EST
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Dec 12 2007, 4:24 PM EST
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Change: He took Naru to a room and laid her down. Making sure that her wings were not damaged in any way. After leaving her he headed out to find the man that he thought could trying not to get caught.“Look who decided to drop
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Dec 12 2007, 4:18 PM EST
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Dec 12 2007, 4:17 PM EST
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Change: She walked in to where Keida was and tried waking her up, but she wouldn’t budge. Keida finally woke when Naru pulled the covers off
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Dec 8 2007, 12:24 AM EST
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Dec 8 2007, 12:23 AM EST
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Change: Her breath stopped suddenly and she fell without making a sound. It was almost as if she was as light as a feather. Her eyes
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Oct 29 2007, 6:46 PM EDT
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Change: Detesting Keida’s words Hemutari continued walking. Naru and Keida rushed up to her, but Hemutari ran away from them. She ran so fast that no
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Oct 14 2007, 6:29 PM EDT
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Change: Inside was Pouge, and he had a cat tail and ears. These ears looked like the one's he had tried on earlier, but only these
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Oct 14 2007, 6:19 PM EDT
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Sep 5 2007, 4:20 PM EDT
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Change: A few hours after the incident Naru got a call on her cell phone. It was Kirt, and he was crying. "Listen Naru," he said,
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Aug 29 2007, 5:28 PM EDT
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Change: and she dropped the glass of water. Keida then passed out and glass pierced her delicate skin. Lucky for her a nurse was walking by and put her into another emergency room. Thoughts of what she had seen earlier were running through her head.
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Aug 27 2007, 3:31 PM EDT
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Change: said, and then she headed down the hall towards the hospital kitchen. She was back in about ten minutes. When she got back with the water she stood, her face blank, and she dropped the glass of water.
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Aug 25 2007, 1:56 AM EDT
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Change: "This is so fun," said Pogue, "I wish every other time I've been to the mall I would've had this much fun." Naru smiled, then
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Aug 24 2007, 1:30 AM EDT
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Change: KiedaKeida to come home. It was five o'clock, and they were suposed to be going on blind dates with their friends Hemutari. The clock ticked by slowly. It was about five-thirty when KiedaKeida finally came through the door. "Ahhh!" shouted
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Aug 23 2007, 2:28 AM EDT
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Change: walked to the end of the driveway and found Pogue circling the block. "Hey!" shouted Naru, "Do you think you could give me a ride
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Aug 23 2007, 1:59 AM EDT
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Aug 23 2007, 1:57 AM EDT
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Aug 22 2007, 4:08 PM EDT
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Change: blonde, brown, and blue hair, and a diamond belly-button ring. They both jumped into Naru's red convertable. Naru didn't put the top up because she didn't want their hair to get messed up. Kieda turned up the stereo as loud as Naru
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Aug 22 2007, 2:02 AM EDT
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